Wendy Sand Eckel’s Murder at Barclay Meadow (Minotaur Books, 2015), takes place in a small college town, on a river, in a rural area, where gossip travels fast and everyone knows everyone. Change comes slowly, and the come-heres’ efforts to find acceptance are constant. The town of Cardigan on the Eastern Shore of Maryland may look familiar to Common Sense readers. But one day, a chicken-necker (a “come-here”) from Chevy Chase discovers a surprise in the marsh grass near her dock. A corpse. Female. College-aged. With a fancy brand-name backpack.
Rosalie Hart, the story’s narrator, becomes obsessed with finding the murderer of the John Adams College student Megan Johnston. Rose commences her amateur detective work with no help from local law enforcement and succeeds in exposing the killer at the end. She, naturally enough, runs into an obstacle or two, one of which is her come-here status.
Rose faces hostility and threats from the whiskey-breathed local sheriff, whose family has been in the sheriff’s office for three generations. He even may have fired a deer-rifle round through her dining room window during a dinner party. If that weren’t enough, he manhandles, harasses, and, without real cause, arrests her. He also frustrates Rose’s investigation by not releasing the police report on the murder. Rhonda, a friend of Megan’s family and illicit lover of Megan’s stepfather, was hostile towards and perhaps even jealous of Megan, enough so that Rhonda becomes a suspect, too. College psychology professor Nick, whose field is human sexuality, is handsome, well-dressed, and smooth to the point of slick. He makes moves on Rose that she fights to resist. Worse, he may have murdered his student Megan to cover up an affair with her.
Rose has allies in her quest to find justice for Megan. She gets important background and moral support from her divorce lawyer Tom Bestman (get it?). She enrolls in an adult-ed memoir writing course, but fears she has no life worth writing about. However, she and her classmates form, yes, a Facebook-based group to solve the crime. The help she gets from her friends is critical to solving the mystery.
Eckel’s efforts to make Rose an engaging, strong, and sympathetic hero succeed--more or less. Rose does develop an honest, credible affection (not at all macabre) for the deceased Megan, genuinely trying to get justice for someone who otherwise has no a chance for it. In her quest, Rose courageously fights her own legitimate fears.
But sometimes as a narrator, Rose’s language lacks what Aristotle calls “ethical appeal,” the appeal of the speaker’s character or personality. One of Rose’s frequent stylistic quirks is, simply, product placement. The narrator-protagonist’s frequent attention to commercial brands, most often fashion accessories, harms and possibly undercuts Rose’s integrity.
For instance, the dead Megan wore a Vera Bradley backpack (“doodle daisy” pattern). Rose’s daughter, a Duke student whom Rose misses terribly, comes home with a “doodle daisy” bag, which suggests a connection between the living and dead daughters. Other women are equipped with brand name bags and other accessories—Michael Kors, Kate Spade, Chanel, etc. etc. Whatever may be Rose Hart’s feminist fearlessness and courage, her ethical appeal diminishes when she constantly notes these materialistic, conspicuous-consumption status signals.
In a similar name-dropping way, Eckel, perhaps amusingly to Eastern Shore residents, works in some genuine Eastern Shore Identity Themes: “the land of pleasant living,” Old Bay seasoning, locals “who want to keep the Eastern Shore the way it’s always been,” and, not least, “the shit house side of Maryland”—a description of the Shore famously used by a Maryland politician.
A good detective story should have a slam-bang crisis resolution climax. Murder at Barton Meadow does not disappoint. Rose provokes a quick, movie-action climax scene, and brings the conflict to an end with her resourceful intelligence and self-possession, neither of which were much in evidence at the start of her adventure. Despite these problems, Murder at Barton Meadow is a fun read set on the Eastern Shore of Maryland. Recommended.
Title image: Pond at Pickering Creek Audubon Center, Talbot Co. Photo: Jan Plotczyk